segunda-feira, 17 de maio de 2010

Composições de 7º ano

Ainda bem que este ano tenho ISTO para corrigir. Andava a ficar preocupada que talvez fosse eu que não sabia ensinar!
O tema era "Bullying is an enormous problem at school. What do you know about it? Write a 100-word composition using your own words as far as possible."A título de exemplo deixo estas 2 preciosidades.

"Bullying is when someone is doing or saying things to get power over another person. Bullying is a kind of segregation, because it is a behaviour which lets people aside and makes the bullied feel afraid and uncomfortable among peers. They lose confidence and the will to go to school. Sometimes the bullied commits suicide once he can't stand the depression or fear as bullying can be seen as a way of release the fury they bring inside them."

"Nowadays there are lots of causes for bullying in our schools. Bullying is when someone hurts or says things to have power or control over another person. Bullies usually call names, threat, frighter or kick other people normally, weaker than them. These people become afraid, uncomfortable, unhappy or scared and they avoid going to school or they avoid being with other students and get lonely suffering silently.
Bullying is a wrong behaviour and if a person is bullied he/she should talk with his/her parents and teachers. Bullying is a very serious issue and those who are bullied may become affected forever."

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